Avoiding Vague Pronoun References
- To avoid a vague pronoun reference, make sure that a pronoun cannot possibly refer to more than one antecedent. If a pronoun seems to refer to more than one antecedent, either reword the sentence to make the antecedent clear or eliminate the pronoun.
Vague: When Lily saw her friend, she smiled.
(Which word is the antecedent of she? Did Lily or her friend smile?)
Clear: Lily smiled when she saw her friend.
(In this reworded sentence, Lily is clearly the antecedent of she.)
Clear: When Lily saw her friend, Lily smiled.
(In this sentence, Lily replaced she; now it is clear who smiled.)
- Vague pronoun references also occur when the pronouns it, you, and they are incorrectly used as indefinite pronouns. In these cases, change the pronoun to a noun that names the performer of the action.
Vague: On my street, they pick up the garbage on Mondays.
Clear: On my street, trash collectors pick up the garbage on Mondays.
Vague: In this magazine article, it recommends eating more vegetables.
Clear: In this magazine article, the writer recommends eating more vegetables.
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